Comments : Broken White Picket Fence

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This was quite a sad poem, however the ending made it go in a completely different direction. I like how it had quite an inspiring, positive ending. It sent the message that, even though we suffer and life can be harsh, that pain won't be forever, and things will get better.

    I enjoyed the read. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    That was an awsome poem very well written and thanks for your comments on my poem your very talented

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man all's well that ends well lol. Great ending. Not that the whole poem wasn't poem but the ending really made it to me. Great job
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow, your poem is so damn emotional. A bit hard to understand in some part but still excellent job. You deserve 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great poem, i love how u worded it, 5/5
    n thanx for the comment on mine 2.
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    I loved it, the word choice alone suited the poem, it was really beautifully written and a pleasure to read, and yet so sad. I loved it, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Loved this piece the emotion was amazing when ever you need to be nspired read this poem you did an awesome job flawless so far this is my favoite of yours