Comments : Your Words

  • 17 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    This is really deep.
    i love the rhyme scheme in this peom
    twas beautifully written
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dee

    No one ever told me, that love came with pain
    Now here I sit, tears cascade like rain.

    Why is it that I'm running, running from you
    When I thought you were a friend, one to be true?
    Unfortunately, my senses were completely wrong
    And now I'm on the edge of weak and strong.

    Wow - this is powerful. I loved all of it. I am seeing myself in your writing. Stress, being weak and being strong is the story of my ever changing moods. I may have to write a poem focusing on these key words. Keep writing. You are gifted.

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    You are a really talented writter. I love how you convey your emotions into words. Keep it up and don't ever stop!