Nitin
Although short this piece is perfect. It holds so much in it's two stanzas.

Same tears from different eyes
Same destiny at different shore
Same fears from different lies
Love is all that we are looking for

Though people live in different places and different cultures. The pain we feel and the tears we cry are all the same. Very thought provoking write. Love the play on the opposites. Imagery and word choices are awesome.
Excellent job yaar!
Love Cindy

Hi Nitin,

I love this poem by you. Every human is different but there is one thing that is the same all over this world: our need to be loved. Even our animals need it to stay healthy and sane!

I am going to give you a 5/5 for this lovely piece!

Best wishes for you and your girl,

Ingrid

Well hello. It's been awhile since I read something from you. In two short verses, you've said so much. I really thought there was a lot of depth in this poem. So well written. A beautiful poem.

A very beautiful piece!.. such deep expression in such few words.. fantastic

Aww thats a great poem neatly tied together and so sweetly, xox sam

Wa, wa,wa, very true. I give you 100 /5

....seems we as members of the human race no matter our distance feel our emotions and losses in exactly the same way....and in the end as you put it so perefectly....

"Love is all that we are looking for"

You've said it all in this short little piece....

Take care, Debbie

Nitin,

lovely. what you say in these concise verses is so sad and sometimes so true. I like the way this reads: "Love is all we are looking for." - alas, if only we would all realize that!

great writing my dear friend

shobhana

Thats a beautiful simple piece small in words but so much bigger in meaning, xox sam

Wow this is short but very effective it really catches the readers attention and says what you are trying to say
great expression of word choice and it flowed nicely
great job
5/5

This poem is short but powerful. Excellent.