Comments : When you wake

  • 16 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    I think it's good the way it is, poems can be any length you want in order to fully express your emotions. You're a good poet, and I like this poem alot. I think alot of people have had these same feelings you wrote about. Kepp writing, you've got talent.
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarahh

    This is great :)
    i like it 5/5