One suicide Two attempts

by VYXSIN   Nov 19, 2007


Today a boy walked in front of a car
And another cut his wrists
A girl overdosed on pills
But it all has a twist

That boy who walked in front of the car
No he didnt die
It was still a suicide attempt
That made his family cry

He was only fourteen
Now he has brain damage
Hes still in a coma
And nobody can manage

He thought everything would go through
And that he would have died
But no hes still haning on
Hes only just alive

The other one who cut his wrists
He was found almost dead
Lying in his own blood
On top of his bed

His clothes soaked through
All he sees is a fuzz
A note beside him
That explains what he does

Hes being put into psychiatric care
He sits in his bed all he can do is cry
He can't believe he isnt dead
Can't believe he didnt die

The girl that overdosed
She is no longer alive
No one can believe that
She has already died

At only thirteen
She had so much ahead
But that can be all forgotten
Cause now she is dead

She had attempted three times
And twice she used the knife
That third she hung herself
When she tried to talk her life

Shed had enough
Cause the pain you couldnt see
By the way the girl that killed herself
That girl is me...

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  • I LOVE all of the empotion you express in all your poetry.This one especaly(sp?). You have a great gift for poetry. It's amazing i'm a true fan. Plz don't stop writing. I'm going through some stuff right now too and i know it"s hard. I have also have been diagnosed with depression. It's difficult I know...but i'm here if you want to talk. Great poem....i'm adding it to my favorites. 5/5