Invisible is my wish

by Alicia Jane   Nov 19, 2007


I wish i could be invisible,
run away and hide,
hide and go seek but
seeking whats inside.

I wish i could be invisible,
hidden from the eyes,
from the eyes of others,
passing bye.

I wish i could be invisible,
left alone for once,
for once to be able,
to just cry not asked,
are u alright.

I wish i could be invisible,
Happy in my own sad way,
sad way of being happy,
Either way it might help,
to question my thoughts.

I wish i could be invisible,
others wouldn't have to notice,
notice I'm lost in my life,
not knowing wrong from rights,
a wish of death in my head.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    O MY GOSH!!!!!!!! all time best poem you've ever written, (in my opinion) great great x 1 million greats, lol

    happy holidays
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by Alyssia L K

    I like this poem 2... I feel u on it, at times I wish I could escape to place only I know about. It would help me think bout things and cry as much as I need without bein asked whats wrong..

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Not a bad start, but your flow is off a bit. I like the emotion and thought behind, you just need to tighten up th elines a bit. For example:

    I wish I were invisible,
    Hidden from the eyes,
    Unperceived by others,
    Strangers passing by.

    JUst as an example of flow. I hope I helped. Keep writing :)

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