This poem was very well written. i liked it very much. but it did feel a little forced. try to make it feel more relaxed.
very good poem though

Amazing imagery and wording. These lines got to me the most. 5/5

"Nature has no rectangular serenity
A breast bone from the harp's plea"

Wow, wow, wow... I'm speechless... I haven't read so powerful poem about life in a while.
This is so deep and it touched me in so many ways. You're truly great poet, you paint brilliant pictures with words. This is enjoyable read, filled with hidden meanings and amazing imagery.
Well done!
5/5

Simple but sweet. Well written and I like the flow. Another 5/5 from me!!!

Great piece! Wonderfully written and amazing imagery!
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5/5