Memories of us

WOW this one is amazing!! im like seriously speechless 5/5

I didn't enjoy this poem as much as the rest of yours, it was good but to me not great. The flow seemed a little off to me in some places causing it to almost jump while I was reading it. The emotion was deep I liked that about the poem I ld feel it was real though at the same time some of your lines were too cliche for my liking. I think you could really work well with longer lines too I'd like to see that coming from you, a different style. Overall a good piece but not a favorite by you. Good effort. ~Mel

Amazing!

i love this poem because i can relate to it so well. my fav stanza was:

The long talks,
And the kisses so sweet.
The memories of us,
I could never delete.

i love it because it was so sweet and true. keep up the awesome work.

The emotions here were real and ones I could relate with. I do think the flow was a bit rocky and things felt forced. Other than that it was a good poem.

Great poem! It has a lot of passion behind the words.