Beuatifully written ,well done.The memories just aren't the same as having that person around though ,but at least they give comfort.

Gr8 poem , well written :D:D

This definitely shows a lot of love from within. It deserves more than a 5 in my humble and honest opinion. 5/5

Aww i love dis poem, so sweet! beautifully written, 5/5. great work hun. ooh n thnx for commentin mine 2!
xx love

Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!

I love this poem i can totally relate!!!

Great poem! It has a lot of passion behind the words.

The emotions here were real and ones I could relate with. I do think the flow was a bit rocky and things felt forced. Other than that it was a good poem.

Amazing!

i love this poem because i can relate to it so well. my fav stanza was:

The long talks,
And the kisses so sweet.
The memories of us,
I could never delete.

i love it because it was so sweet and true. keep up the awesome work.

I didn't enjoy this poem as much as the rest of yours, it was good but to me not great. The flow seemed a little off to me in some places causing it to almost jump while I was reading it. The emotion was deep I liked that about the poem I ld feel it was real though at the same time some of your lines were too cliche for my liking. I think you could really work well with longer lines too I'd like to see that coming from you, a different style. Overall a good piece but not a favorite by you. Good effort. ~Mel

WOW this one is amazing!! im like seriously speechless 5/5