Thanx for comment me.

Now this is indeed very unique, great write

all the best and take care

Hey i like the theme.. Maybe you need some help... No doubt the concept is nice, but still there are certain areas where you need correction. grammar is one such area. spell error are ok... but i like your concept. njoi!

Well ur title really caught my eye...i read it thoroughly...good depiction of thoughts going in the mind of a hen..I guess the grammar and all hardly matters cause it's your thought that really speaks louder than any words... and i understand it. So I gave it a 5 on 5.

Regards,
Neo Castelino.

Thanx, My english is not good. Thanx for understand my thought.

This is a very nice message to express in a poem and using a hen in a butchers shop how clever i liked the idea and your words great job 5.5

When I begin to read this I had no idea what to expect, but as I continue reading I saw the meaning and the image you try to portray.Nice poem.