Comments : Assassins Deed

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi Sam!

    It's kind of a story...they sound like evil women, these Kunoichi brr!
    Nice poem, my friend.

    5/5 always Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    What a wonderful job you didi putting this story to verse. Imagery is fantastic. It is almost like being there.

    Oblivious to an untimely demise,
    Her victim comes within reach.
    Without honor the target dies,
    The song of steel unleashed.

    This stanza really stood out to me. I love the line "The song of steel unleashed"
    Great job!
    Take Care Cindy