:/ that was pretty good! quite saddening but good

Soooo nice!!

Wow so sad but i have said many times before "sadness makes a gret subject" especially heartbreak i reallky enjoyed reading it! 5/5

laura

Love it! Just love it! Keep Its Up!

Very beautiful!
well done. xxx

I like the ending;
Very nice poem xx

This is too long and i appresiatedthat you have lots of ideas and you've shown some vivid emotions. and honestly, it hit my heart and i like it though i know you can still work this thing and make it more beautiful.. anyway this is nice. keep it up!

Wow so sad and hurting poem, i sympathize with you my friend...may Allah bless you

I really liked your poem i was thinking maybe you could read some of mine and comment me on them

I liike it....but there was a couple lines that seems forced but it was rele good!!!

Aww its was sad piece.. and it well flowed nice keep it up

*Tear*
I cried!!! *Sniffle* I loved it and it is touching and so...Real...T-T

Keep writing! I love your work!!!
5/5

~Ally

This one lost me with in the first 6 lines. It was hard for my dislexic eyes to follow. Sorry.

Good job...best hopes and wishes...

It actually opened some wounds I've persistently held closed and covered for some years - so I can't say anything else but good job. It is very well written.