Silence Sings to Starless Souls (song)

This is a very beautiful poem 5/5

Its really wonderful

This is incredible. its beautifully written! i loved every word of it.

This is really beautiful Corinne, I thought the rhyming was perfect , and the message so sincere and touching. Sometimes they do leave too soon, well done!

'danse macabre'
'Sway with abandon lift your feet'
both lines that serve the poem well, especially with their descriptiveness and the way that they personify themselves and interact with human action. =] The only thing that I would suggest to change for future writing is to rhyme less. The less that you rhyme 'on cue' and in repitition, the more that when you do rhyme, it will capture the reader's attention and make the piece feel more original.