Aww.... That is sad. Defines sad in every way. 5/5

Very inspiring. You write like a friend of mine, short but strong.
I really like the last three lines. Well done.

Great one! loved the emotion in this!

I like the ending 'cause it's touching:)

Brilliantly put, written impeccably. 5/5

I love how you write it so it has two sides the sad begining, and the positive outlook at the end...

"Sadness sends sorrow,
but sorrow moves tomorrow,
for life is everywhere and eternal. "

^Love how you have given the sad beginning a hopeful turn at the end....for every cloud holds a silver lining!!!! Take care....keep writing! Debbie

I love the use of your words in this poems, the oxymorons, the excellent flow. It's quite a moving poem

It was ok....altho there wasnt much emotion in it.

<3 i love you silly

Love it! I love your style of writing, i think that the shorter stanzas really help to bring the point across. 5/5

I absolutely admire intense rhythm of this piece, very creative poem you expressed emotions on a incredible way and created a truly captivating tone.
Well done, very original work and atmosphere in whole poem is remarkable!

Amazing work, the stanza that really made it was the last one---Sadness sends sorrow,
but sorrow moves tomorrow,
for life is everywhere and eternal----just beautiful. keep up with the great work--tara

This did make me sad.... It made me have that rush as sadness, like the first second when your heart sinks after hearing bad news. Very interesting to read.

~*~Alex~*~

Hmmm... I really liked the last 3 lines but the rest didn't seem to click in for me. Bu the flw as good. But I think it could be better. Good job.

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