GOD I loved that ending part that was so freeking cool I fell of my chair....

The poem was very well written and is simply beautifull...

I dont know what to say... more than nice work and dont do drugs...

Take care =D

I loved this one yet again. It was again another heartfelt piece. It put a smile on my face in more ways then one. One was because of the way you wrote this, so beautiful and elegant. The second was because of my boyfriend your words just remind me of him when we are mucking around with the whole shakespears way of talking. So you really got to my heart deeply with this. Loved it. ~Mel

Bryan
Great job on this piece. The imagery is wonderful.

But it seems that my heart was the one deceived,
As I reminisce to A Mid-Summer's Eve.

Loved these ending lines.
Take care
Cindy

Hi i love the poem its beautiful ive been there too many times