This is pretty good, i would love to know the background on this poem please pm me if you don't mind me knowing.

I like this poem. It's almost like me imagining you talking to someone face-to-face as I kept on reading it. In other words, this is a good poem in terms of seeing all 100 percent of your feelings come out.

Normally I would say to add capitals and work on the grammatical issues, but I think that in this case the lack of proper grammar makes you come across a little more childlike. And there is a child in all of us who needs their mother. I'm not sure if you did that on purpose, but good job on that.

I also think you overdid the repetition a little bit in the last stanza (with the word promise). But that's not too important.

The most important part of a poem -in my opinion- is the emotion it conveys and how it makes the reader feel. On that note, GREAT job. Your feelings are very clear throughout the entire poem, and also very strong.

Take care.

I love this poem it had a lot of emotion into it and like others said it as if your talkin face to face with someone.
5/5
Good Job!!!!