Omg this is so sad. i love this poem. the flow is nice and its good.

Although my face you cannot see,
My hands you cannot hold,...

^^ those lines are very sweet. i love them. i can relate to them also. i lost my baby cousin and i miss him so much, but your poem made me happy because now i think that hes there for me eventhough he isnt in life right beside to me i know that hes watching me from up above. 5/5

This is a wonderful poem....and i bet the man you wrote this for has appreciated that you hv taken the tym to write this..to let him kno that his son will always be his truly.....his son will never be truly gone for if he still has memories of the happy times they spent together then he's always with you!!

keep it up
gr8 poem..

plz read and comment on some of my poems, any that catch ur fancy:D
tk care
bree