Watching Sweetness Getting Disturbed

by The Only Mistake   Nov 19, 2007


We stood closely together
Together on distant roads
Roads leading towards us as we were watching
Watching sweetness getting disturbed

Whole my life I have been waiting
Waiting for the start of it all
All or nothing is what we play for
For there is everything in nothing

Hell was unleashed as Heaven stood watching
Watching me, watching all
All there was left was nothing
Nothing worth living for

I watched as we closed our eyes
Eyes so blind to see
See, it has been said so many times
Times like these are when I want you with me

How come we feel lonely when we're together?
Together I have never felt this way
Way too distant as we stand this closely
Closely I have been watching it all

--- Probably my last poem here. Haven't got time anymore... Thanks for the messages I received, I really appreciate it! See you around... ---

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