Comments : The Only Thing Left

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    First off. This poem is excellent
    Secondly. The first stanza is amazing. You did such a good job to capture the readers attention in that stanza and made sure the attention was kept all through the poem. The rhyming and flow of this was also excellent and the poem is wonderfully written.

    5/5

    Keep it up && Take Care

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by ABake

    I loved this peice. The emotion was deep and you could feel your pain which is great. The flow was not off at all and I liked the repitition of the title. You kept my attention and the last stanza summed up this peice in a great way. Overall, an amazing write.
    5/5

    Amber...

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I really really enjoyed this piece, and the repetition of your title throughout. It's very good and really made that point stand out. Oh, we all know the pain of feeling played with. Good job!
    *ME*

  • 15 years ago

    by El

    Another fantastic poem. Rhyming and flow was really good and i could really feel the emotion.
    dont ever stop writing :)