First off. This poem is excellent |
by ABake
I loved this peice. The emotion was deep and you could feel your pain which is great. The flow was not off at all and I liked the repitition of the title. You kept my attention and the last stanza summed up this peice in a great way. Overall, an amazing write. |
by MyEscape
I really really enjoyed this piece, and the repetition of your title throughout. It's very good and really made that point stand out. Oh, we all know the pain of feeling played with. Good job! |
by El
Another fantastic poem. Rhyming and flow was really good and i could really feel the emotion. |