Very well written and seemingly very true. Good poem.

Have you ever realised that what i say i mean
Maybe i should see that being with you is just a dream
Maybe one day you'll wake up and be with me
Have you ever thought that this/we were meant to be

I can really relate to these lines, great read, you kept the structure the same which I always have trouble with :). thanks for taking time to rrc on my poem :) it means alot. happy thanksgiving!

Maybe i'm a fool for loving you as i do
Have you ever thought why i can't give up on you

those two lines really got to me. so powerful and eye opening. This is actually a posiotion i was in with one of my closest friends and now we're going out. Keep your chin up, and always remember.....it doesn't always have to end in tears. 5/5 keep writing
kat

That was excellent sweetheart i loved it can relate so much x x x

That was lovely poem
loved the ending
great job!
Lisa

That is a great pome great work

Wow!!!!

I loved this context of this poem, you should take your own advice and keep writing because youalso have a talent that many people have but they never use it, you are brave enough to express your talent to the world by writing.... this is by far one of the best poems i have read on P&Q....

Steph