Comments : Breaking Hearts Has Never Looked So Cool

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    That made me smile. Hehe. The flow was just, so, natural. It was great. The piece was sad, yet happy and cheery in a way. Lol. I loved the title. Not as much emotion as I thought for a title like this, but still great job!
    5.5

    Amber..

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    So I took up breaking hearts and made it chic
    Like a designer Gucci blouse
    Felt my calling was this all along
    Though I was really just a louse.

    I'm impressed with that stanza. I love the way you put Gucci in a poem. I always try to make something cool in my poem. This pone give me inspiration to do that. It must be 5/5!!!