Dead on Arrival

Excellent written poem , very emotional , and very sad , heartreaking is more like it, but it speaks loud and has great meaning to it , great job , love the lines ::::

From a fire long put out
So unsweet it embitters my soul
Do not ask, I will not answer
I will not cast sadness into your veins
Only know not to question me
I am gone,
Never to return...whats more, I never really left
This place of unrelentless cruelty
I was eternally stuck
Dead on arrival

Wonderful job , keep it up ,,, your friend Tracy d ~~~5/5~~~

This is another emotional poem, it's a bit distractive and I can't understand what you want to express in some line. But thanks to the title (that once again interesting) and this line "Creating a void in my moth-filled pocket." Great job!!!

That emotion was wow. I feel so emo reading this. Jk. First, this line was pure amazement for me "Agony enjoys my frown" It just was wow. Lol. I loved the whole poem. Your wording, metaphors everything was just great. Great write!
5.5

Amber..