by ABake
That emotion was wow. I feel so emo reading this. Jk. First, this line was pure amazement for me "Agony enjoys my frown" It just was wow. Lol. I loved the whole poem. Your wording, metaphors everything was just great. Great write! |
This is another emotional poem, it's a bit distractive and I can't understand what you want to express in some line. But thanks to the title (that once again interesting) and this line "Creating a void in my moth-filled pocket." Great job!!! |
Excellent written poem , very emotional , and very sad , heartreaking is more like it, but it speaks loud and has great meaning to it , great job , love the lines :::: |