I really like this poem. Excellente! 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

Thanks so much!

This is really good! its really passionate, and i liked it. 5/5!

Awwww...this poem is sooo cute and beautiful. has so much emotin and passion. i love it. great job. =)

Awww! You drew me in right from the first stanza...I loved the flow & the word choice was great...you have a great talent, so make sure to keep writing more!

Brooke<3

Hey thats a pretty good first poem. i like it, i dont really have much experience at this but keep writing we love it. megz

This is a really good poem. and it also shows alot of emotion! You are really good at writing!! im new at this too and i only have 2 poems and i think that yours are way better than mine!!! great job!

I CAN RELATE TO THIS...I ENJOYED IT..=]
NICE JOB!

Well it being ur first its really good

Very good...keep up the good work

Well this was a hell of a good start, im looking forward to ur future work coz this was excellent!
u capture feelings and describe them soo well =D