by Karl Wild GG23 Nov 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
In the midst of your kiss my heartbeat quickens, |
How romantic!!! This is really sweet... I enjoyed reading it. Good job!!! |
by alia
WOW.. pretty heartfelt.. i like your style alot it makes your poems enjoyable... and one can rly c that u r in love |
by Raging Rikku
I reall like that poem its gives an image of what youn wnat the reader to "see" with nyour words. 5/5 p.s. would u mind looking at sum of my poems also I kinda have a hard time finding friends here so I have to start somewhere! ^_^ |
I love this poem it has so much emotions 2 it. it reminds me of when i first meet my boyfriend. its romantic but very sexy. keep up the good work |
by fearose
This is really good. Its a bit heavy to the eye and tongue but its still awesome! |