This was absolutely beautiful and very heartfelt. I feel as though you've taken the words from my heart. A very passionate poem I thought this was.

Thats so sweet and beautiful. i love the flow of the poem is nice. sometimes i wish that really could happen (when hes nice to me) other times i want to just you know man leave me alone for now (when he makes me mad) but you know if i could do that to someone i would. i can relate to this. Good poem 5/5

This was beautiful. I honestly don't know what to say. I can't express how much I love your poetry it is just so capturing and breath taking. You have no idea. This was sweet and elegant. Portrayed beautifully into a poem which i'm sure many people can relate too. Well done. keep on writing so I can keep on reading. ~mel

I truly enjoyed the last two lines of the poem. It tied everything together beautifully and the power of love was evident throughout. I loved the imagery you presented in the first stanza, it was flawless. Well done *5/5*

This piece touched me deeply, it is so sad and beautiful in the same time...
You expressed emotions fantastically, and did great job with rhymes which made the flow of this piece absolutely perfect. Your love poetry is always filled with intense feelings and that leaves great impression on me.
My favorite stanza is:

-I wish the sun would never rise,
When we're apart I want to die,
I can see forever in your eye's,
And I don't want to say good-bye.-

Keep up!
5/5 from me

Eye's should be eyes. You don't need the apostrophe. Third stanza, third line: Your should be you're. Also, you might want to consider "no one" instead of "nothing" in forth stanza, second line--but nothing works fine.

A really sweet poem, Karly. Touched my heart :) Did I already comment on this poem? I feel like I did...Meh, I'm tired.

5/5

This was beautiful.

So much depth and emotion in this piece, that it's overwhelming without being overbearing, while your flow is flawless, it doesn't falter once. The words just roll right from my mouth.

The imagery you created in this piece was beautifully done, created very vivid visuals for me, while the ending stanza was a perfect way to wrap up the piece.

Just a tiny suggestion-I would get rid of some of the "i's" You don't need them there, to me it seemed they were just there for show, and I think the piece would be better without them.

It was ok

This was amazing. there was so much meaning behind each word. i love it :]].
your a passionate person, and it shows. keep it up.

--Tay

Aww. This peice was adorable && as I read I felt pure love coming from your words. The emotion was strong && I loved the whole peice. I do not think your flow was off or anything. Again, great job!
5/5

Amber..

Wow. This was very beautiful and passionate. I love it. Very much. I can relate to what you mean. You always feel like you don't want it to end. That's the usual feeling everyone gets when they love someone so much. 5/5

That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

That was a very nice poem I realy enjoyed it

A very heart warming poem. The imagery is great. A forever love when you find it is indeed a true treasure.

I wish that our hands will never part,
Stay beside me, I'll guide the way,
Your the reason for my beating heart,
The thought that starts and ends each day.

This stanza really touched my heart. Good job!
Take care Cindy

Very beautifully exspressed....you did an amazing job writing this... a perfect love described...i exspecially liked this part:
"I wish that together we will grow old,
Nothing makes me smile the way you do,
We'll be the greatest fairy tale ever told,
I promise my love will never be untrue"

this is how i feel about my fiance.....
definetly a 5/5:)

Thats sooo cute... and real true... i love the way it flows. its really sweet, its the kind of thing every girl wants to hear. i love it! =)