Very nice great flow and very heart felt thanks for shareing it

It's AMAZING..omg u're a gr8 writer.& the whole idea of the poem is just BEAUTIFUL <33..
"The tear never reach the ground, it freezes on the way,
The girl sees the world fade, as everything goes gray.
Now, she stands there, in a garden full of snow,
As a fountain of everlasting beauty, where the ice roses grow. "

Really good! I love it! keep it up!

Yet again a lovely beautiful write. this poem is very beautiful indeed. amazingg!!

Intense and alive. I could see every move she made-beautifully written. Thank you for sharing it..keep writing.

So lovely ....
and so ambiguouse .... you didn't mantion no reson but it was all clear ..
keep writing

Visionary! i loved how you were able to turn a desolate garden into beauty. i also liked the idea of the mirror roses. your awesome! yay

Thanx for commenting on my poem...
Your poems are really good, they are filled with pure feelings, and wonderfull words.