Save it

by ali   Nov 20, 2007


There's a bond with you
which I cannot break

And a love with you
which I cannot take

I'm sorry it has come to this
Don't try to save it
It's dead, it's gone
So don't try to save it

Those words to me
you had to fake

But no matter what, for you
I will always pray...

But I'm sorry it's got to come to this
Don't try and save it
We're dead, it's gone
So don't try to save it

*I'm sorry*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Goooood wordz ....this worked..... to be so nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I read this poem alredy but i had to read about it agian... lol! this poem... hehehehe!

    wat i ment to say was that you dont seem like the type to be in a really bad relationship problem..

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Excellent! it was so straight forward and i have to say i like beating around the bush sometimes, but beautiful.

    nice keep up the work. =)

    thank you for reading my poetry too. i like think your awsome cause you kno wat to say and how to say it!.

    take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh Brilliant, I so loved this, streight to point easy to read and showing ur attitude a bit. And very easy to connect to. Emotions so strong.
    Amazing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    I like it, Maybe its just my style but I would put after "So don't try to save it" something that goes with with gone, maybe "Just leave it alone." Thats just me though. Its still great as is. Another great one, Keep up the good work. ~Zach

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