Good work.. u did well portraying the emotions u were feeling.. its sad but a truthful portrayal on life

Aww..
this sounds like.. like... like a potential breakup song... lol. i like it. 5/5 <3

I like it, Maybe its just my style but I would put after "So don't try to save it" something that goes with with gone, maybe "Just leave it alone." Thats just me though. Its still great as is. Another great one, Keep up the good work. ~Zach

Ahh Brilliant, I so loved this, streight to point easy to read and showing ur attitude a bit. And very easy to connect to. Emotions so strong.
Amazing! 5/5

Excellent! it was so straight forward and i have to say i like beating around the bush sometimes, but beautiful.

nice keep up the work. =)

thank you for reading my poetry too. i like think your awsome cause you kno wat to say and how to say it!.

take care!

I read this poem alredy but i had to read about it agian... lol! this poem... hehehehe!

wat i ment to say was that you dont seem like the type to be in a really bad relationship problem..

Goooood wordz ....this worked..... to be so nice