I thought that this was such a delight to read. Simple yet innocent, bringing the love forward in a poem.

Planning our day to leave
As we watch the passing cars
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I love this part so much!

I wish God could this pause now
So I never had to leave this time
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I think you meant, "I wish God could pause this now"

And I loved how you ended, thanking God for bringing such a wonderful person to your life. 5/5 (: