by Georgi Nov 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Loud, initial cries |
HELLO! |
Greatly written from the first to the last line. You created remarkable imagery and your descriptions are very heartfelt and vivid. Every stanza is truly original, different from anything I've read before. |
I love this poem too :D it is amazing and true. my sister recently had a daughter so i can totally picture this :) good job! |