by Nix
Powerful ending, whole poem has great tone, I really like the way you described emotions, very deep message and good topic. |
Hmmmm.........the last stanza was good. |
by Eri
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How ironic, my favorite poem u've wrote so far is the only 1 i haven'y commented on from u...well i love it! wat more can i say? lol 5/5 |
by StandStill
Jesse, this is an amazing poem. really really. love it. simplywaiting is lucky to be so blessed <3 |
by she
Wow, this is... wow |