Comments : Waiting to Stop Waiting

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Powerful ending, whole poem has great tone, I really like the way you described emotions, very deep message and good topic.
    I like repetition of lines-sitting here and waiting- because it adds so much effect to the rhythm of this piece. Anyway well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    Hmmmm.........the last stanza was good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

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    I love it! you're a very good writer! [x

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    How ironic, my favorite poem u've wrote so far is the only 1 i haven'y commented on from u...well i love it! wat more can i say? lol 5/5
    xoxox
    ~waiting~

    p.s. this is the only poem on my favorite poems list :]

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Jesse, this is an amazing poem. really really. love it. simplywaiting is lucky to be so blessed <3

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Wow, this is... wow