Awwww! That was so freakin' sweet! I'm envious at how beautiful this is. :P It had me smiling the whole way through. The flow was flawless, the vocab was great, and the emotions were strong. :) Magnificent job, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

By the way:
"[My legs are prepared to leap, just in case you leave again]"
^^^ This line is simply perfection! -sigh-

-- Steph. <33

Your style of writing is unique... i notice you use QUOTATIONS and i LOVE that! it makes you feel like you're there! great job!

I love how you can relate and write about love so perfectly and from the heart, your words are always true. You have so much potential as a writer it's remarkable, never stop writing. Excellent - Excellent job 5/5 GG23

"Your holding " >> you're *

" try & not" << Try to not

Darling, I love this poem so much.
I know that feeling, those feelings.
I can honestly relate to like everything you write - everything.

I love it. (:

Keep it up.

Perfect title ^.^ This poem was cute! Very create and good choice of words! <33

Wow that last stanza just blew me away with its beauty! The love and sadness you wrote with was amazing and created a flawless vibe. Nicely done. *5/5*

This poem is very relatable, and I'm absolutely in love with it. I was drawn in by the beauty of your words and held until the end, and was very sad to be let go. The imagery, just hit home.
Amazing work.
5/5.