by KJ
Hmmm...very nice poem. I loved it. |
Aw! |
by HaileyHelen
This was cute! i think that it was beautifully written and it posseses a sort of elegance to the words! |
by Blissful
Oh what a beautifully amazing ending. It just left me with a smile and saying "aww..." I loved the happy ending here ... sometimes the scars of a past love still linger on your heart and youre afraid to opens its doors once again but sometimes you can miss on a lot of things. But the person that breaks down the barrier, is the person that deserves your heart. |
Definately another wonderful piece, the word choice and vocab as always were great. We all have fears and a lot of us have the same fear when it comes to love, but the only way to be truly happy is to open yourself up to the risk of heartache. amazing as always 5/5 GG23 |
by Teria
Awh. |
by Red CSIII
Precious ^_^ |
You definitely have a way with words. I particularly loved the line "I've got a fear of flying and sweetie you make me soar," It's a lovely paraodox that fits in nicely with the piece. Great piece 5/5 |
by Brittany
AMAZING. I LOVE THIS. |
by Cheyanne
Awww this was an incredible poem.....the ending was just so amazinly sweet....beautifully written 5/5:) |
Wow i like this poem it is soooo sweet. you did a nice job |