What makes a nature poem stand out and amaze, is its wonderful imagery, and that is what this poem possessed. Each line was just refreshing and beautiful in each way. The scene you described in detail, etched into my mind as I read, which made the mood of the poem get across quite effectively. Overall. a wonderful read. Well done *5/5*

I thought this poem was outstanding and there is really no need for me to look at the actual picture, I have the perfect image in my head already. Great flow and word choice as well, I usually stop to take notice of the little things, everything has something beautiful about it. Excellent job 5/5 GG23