Comments : Pale Blue Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by NeferNoir

    They glowed each time she smiled,
    They whispered by the fire,
    Lost behind her soulful gaze,
    Burning with desire.

    Beautiful.. Great way to start a poem.. Though it is short, it delivers a clear message... Excellent perception in expressing emotions...

    A delightful read... 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Wow. It was very short, but I think that made it even better.
    "You took for granted everything,
    She ever gave to you,
    Now cursed to hold the memory,
    Of eyes so pale and blue."
    This was a great way to end the poem. I may have clicked on it for the title (my eyes are an unusually pale shade of blue), but I continued reading it for the beauty of it. 5/5