For the one I love

by Shinobi   Nov 21, 2007


A big burden was left upon whoever had my heart
Truly a heavy feeling surrounded those near
Warm expressions are all I needed from the start
Although I received some, my thoughts are twisted with fear

As the rain drops crush, so does my sanity
The cloudy skies darken my emotion
Mind and heart brought to a state of calamity
Where I can no longer fulfill my devotion

True partners always stay by each other's side
In any phase of relationship they might be
The gates of your heart are open wide
Your trusting glances and open feelings are calling me

Issues of my heart involve my lack of confidence
Love life had never appeared as I longed for
A big role of failure was played by my arrogance
Whole relationships shattered, it was too big to ignore

You embraced me as a loyal friend, I'm sure
Whenever in trouble you summon me to your side
Slowly, your personality came to lure
A faithful friend who will always abide

Your mind and heart never ceased to amaze me
Now I see that our divine link is a connection from above
I'd never expect less of you, because you see
My ultimate offering can only be given to the one I love

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  • 16 years ago

    by Red CSIII

    I'm right there with you man, same way I met my ladyfriend, It's amazing what can grow out of a friendship isn't it? Thank you for reconnecting me with these feelings! I've gotta say, it's been a while ^_^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Amazing poem.
    i enjoyed reading it.
    the emotion in this piece was amazing.
    i really like it.
    especially the last stanza.
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    You embraced me as a loyal friend, I'm sure
    Whenever in trouble you summon me to your side
    Slowly, your personality came to lure
    A faithful friend who will always abide

    That is super true and super sweet~great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by KJ

    WOW! I freakin loved this poem. Great Job! Loved It! 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS