Lol.
There's no need to bash it, it's amazing.
The flow was off here and there, but overall it's a great poem.

And, I'm sorry about that, eh. :/
Must be hard.
Hopefully you have people there to help, I'm sure you do.
If you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here, eh. . .
Half way across the world.
Lol.

Okay, enough babbling.
Amazing job.
5.5