by N J Thornton Nov 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I was trying to hear the song |
by N J Thornton
It's not meant to flow, nor is it meant to be emotional. Think of the poem's subject - bumpy journey and becoming distant from a partner. |
by Teria
Hmm. I think the flow was off in this one, the actual idea of it was great. But, I'm not too fond of it. |