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by N J Thornton Nov 21, 2007 category : Life, society / about society
The bus was packed that Sunday afternoon. I was getting impatient with the man in front. He had the Arctic Monkeys blasting from his face. It's a shame I'm not a fan, or I'd have yelled along. Between the change of track I breathed a moment of silence which slithered through the split second and splashed into more noise. Feed the baby! I yelled in my mind. My eyes stoned the mother who starved her child of milk and love. "It's Jeff, I'm on the bus, what's for tea?" Apparently, he made a doctors appointment for Wednesday morning. The bus wondered what Jeff had. My ears rang; I pressed the bell; my head pounded.
by Teria
Hmm. It's different, I do like it though. I like how your poems are unique. And, kind of simple as well. Keep it up, hun.