Savior of a Doll

by Normal is the Watchword   Nov 21, 2007


Snow melted below zero, below sight
Fogged pane? Sunlit branch? Nothing
Sidewalk shattered, staggered shoelace
And fell...fell...fell into the blackness
Of Earth
Of circles pushed to square holes
Left Behind where winter will not fall
Buttoned hollowed orbs unfazed
Savior of a doll.

[To be saved in a world that turns its back on you, is to be saved yourself. To be saved with anything that holds the faith that you lost when you don't fit into society because of what happened to you.]

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Very strange poem. And that's good. I had to imagine all of it whether I understood it all or not. I enjoyed that little tid bit you had at the end. I particularly enjoyed the sidewalk shattered part. It was unique and fun to picture. For this I think I shall give you aaaaa.....*drum roll* Five. It was truly unique and unlike anything I have read before. I clap for you. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexa Eudis

    Wow, really great poem. short but oozing with emotion

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful write. Oh did i mention it was FREAKING WONDERFUL! To much of this poetry on here is a bunch of crap, and its refreshing to read things like this every now and then. You did such a great job with your word choice *again!* and the flow was amazing. such a sad write, but so good at the same time! wonderful and powerful write! Keep it up! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    I thought this was amsome, very sad,short but powerful 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I don't have as many words as all your other reviewers, so im sorry. but i really loved this peace. amazing... <3

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