by Viola
Well I surely understand it. It might not be a perfectly flowing poem..but it doesn't have to be. It has all the emotion in it. And after all loosing a love is a confusing situation...and if that is expressed in the poem..then the poem is doing a good job of expressing the emotions the poet felt at the time (which is "what you did). |
by MyEscape
It is confusing, but so is love and life and at times what we say just won't make sense, but I liked the way in which you wrote it. You have a nice flow to the piece. |
by babypeaches
WOW. I loved it it was full of emotione it was very good. |
I like it :) |