Comments : Life vs Love.

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    Well I surely understand it. It might not be a perfectly flowing poem..but it doesn't have to be. It has all the emotion in it. And after all loosing a love is a confusing situation...and if that is expressed in the poem..then the poem is doing a good job of expressing the emotions the poet felt at the time (which is "what you did).
    I like this, as painful as it is, I like it. I'm sure people can relate.

    You don't have your faith in your own hands
    But you do have your choices and actions"

    ^That is so very true. It's how life works. We don't get to choose what happends but we do get to choose how we react to it. Great work! =] keep it up.
    --Viola

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    It is confusing, but so is love and life and at times what we say just won't make sense, but I liked the way in which you wrote it. You have a nice flow to the piece.
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by babypeaches

    WOW. I loved it it was full of emotione it was very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Disposition

    I like it :)