A Sad Birthday

by Laurenf7   Nov 21, 2007


Blown out the candles
Smiles on your face
Looking extremely happy
Beneath all the pain.

Another year older
Where does time go?
But for you time
Continues to stay slow

We want to help
You never let us in
Remember..
We are always right here
If life gets too hard.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    This is sweet.
    Sad, but sweet.
    Letting her/him know you're there is about all you can do.

    The flow is great.
    The emotion, the feelings, the word choice.
    it's all great.

    A flawless poem, darling.

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