Caution

by cowgirlstar26   Nov 22, 2007


Oh my God I'm so lost
maybe just confused
shattered memories dwell here
theres nothing left, nothing to lose

dazed and wandering
I'm out here in the cold
screaming out into the night
so many stories left untold

this pain sinks deeper
raging in my chest
bleeding out my soul
all my secrets safely kept

everything is nothing
night is day
pain is pleasure
but we've always had it this way

your right, I'm not common
like a tiny grain of sand
guess what? yeah
I slipped out of your hands

but you had me all along
hating you was no option
so whats to be made of this?
stamped on my heart, CAUTION

It's like nothing has changed
my heart can't take it anymore
I can't rid these thoughts of you
not since I walked through life's door

How dare you say it
that you still love me
cause we crossed a line
who knew you'd just leave

I've tried to understand
tried to cast this aside
I'm trying to forget everything
but left with sleepless nights

look me in the eyes
then maybe I'll believe
cause this is all too much
maybe now you'll see....

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  • 16 years ago

    by xRenaissancex

    Amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I really like this piece. The only thing that disturbed the great flow in some parts is repetition of some words, like the word -heart- in the sixth and the seventh stanza.
    I can relate to this piece in so many ways, which made it even more powerful for me. You expressed every emotion excellently, painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind.

    Your in the fifth stanza should be you're (I just noticed that in re-reading)
    All in all, great job on this piece.
    My favorite stanzas are:

    -dazed and wandering
    I'm out here in the cold
    screaming out into the night
    so many stories left untold-

    -your right, your not common
    like a tiny grain of sand
    guess what? yeah
    I slipped out of your hands-

    Keep writing!
    5/5