I really like this piece. The only thing that disturbed the great flow in some parts is repetition of some words, like the word -heart- in the sixth and the seventh stanza.
I can relate to this piece in so many ways, which made it even more powerful for me. You expressed every emotion excellently, painting vivid pictures in the reader's mind.

Your in the fifth stanza should be you're (I just noticed that in re-reading)
All in all, great job on this piece.
My favorite stanzas are:

-dazed and wandering
I'm out here in the cold
screaming out into the night
so many stories left untold-

-your right, your not common
like a tiny grain of sand
guess what? yeah
I slipped out of your hands-

Keep writing!
5/5

Amazing!