by ABake Nov 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
So long to fake words & artificial smiles; I still love you. |
This poems is amaazzing..it's breath taking and it has so much emotion..this is probably one of the best poems i've read on this site...i absolutely love it! <3 |
Omg thats sad but cute LOL i love it I'm voting !! |
Wow.. another spectacular poem.. the only part i didn't like was the part about the world that stopped spinning.. its a bit cliche...but i really like your style of writing, though i don't understand the use of the parentheses.. |
by Christina
Wow another great poem.......and i can relate!!! im giving you 5/5 not to be niice but because you deserve it!!! keep up the great work!! |
by nell
Ur poem is really good :) |