Rawr! nice work baby!! =) so proud of you!! .let me kiss you untill you say stop...let me do anything you want me to do.coz tonighy baby i wana get freaky with you..!! haha.. that was a song.. =) and i love singing it...then laughing out loud... keep writing baby!

5/5

Great write, I'm not sure whats up with the structure but I like the repetition and it fits perfectly. I don't know why but when I was reading this I got the quote in my head "The only reason I would kick you out my bed, would be if I wanted to f**k you on the floor." Great quote, haha. Sorry I'm random like that. Well keep up the good work and the best of sex to ya. :P ~Zach

Wow that was really good. i liked it alot. THe emotions were woven thoughout the entire poem. nice rythm and flow. 5/5

I absolutely love the repition on this poem. Well done on expressing the feeling. You had a mispelled word though. You spelled "gentally" and it's supposed to be "gently." Absolutely amazing though. 5/5<---all the way.

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Dam, thats hot lol wait how old are you again.... lol im just playin, great write hun :) 5

Very intimate poem, very descriptive

5/5