Great poem, with effective choice of words. I like your descriptions a lot, and the whole atmosphere of this piece is truly captivating.
Whole piece is very original, filled with excellently expressed emotions.
The beginning with -Lets improvise a bit- is great, it pulled me it and captured my attention, and the rest of the poem left deep impression on me.
Keep up!
5/5

Great poem i loved the choice of words u used really expresses the feelings meant. keep up the great work. truley great read! xxx

Well done, as others have already said your choice of vocabulary was outstanding. When you use deeper words it provides a stronger emotion to the reader. I really enjoyed the flow of this poem, and the idea was done really well. Keep up the great work!

This was amazing and I can relate so much to it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

I thought that this poem was very well executed! the ending was really great to me! again great job!

Another well written poem by you, I enjoyed the story and the flow is done great. I gave you another 5/5 for this.

This poem is great. The rhyming in most of the parts are good, the choosing of words shows real affection and raw emotions. The flow went smooth all the way threw, and ofcurse, a great ending. Nice work 5/5

Love the rhyme in this poem, really effective.

5/5

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This was a great poem. and your vocabulary is very advanced. :] i'm very impressed. i wish my vocab was this big. lol. .your words create great images. and this is just an amazing piece of work. :] 5/5.

This is one of those love poem which you can't just call "sweet" but it makes you read it twice. original, unusual. nice work:)