Very heart felt poem haii loved it

The poem is short. The expression of emotion is shown simply with a simple choosing of words. The flow is a little rocky and there aren't many rhymes. Try better next time 3/5

I can conncent with this poem rather well. In my entire life i have cried three times. since the last time a refuse to cry. i enjoyed this one. well written. 5/5

Omg, I totally agree with you on this. I absolutely hate it, also. Except, maybe you should put this on your quote section because it seems like a quote to me. I loved it and I'll still give it 5/5

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Really short but I can totally relate.

So you can
Call yourself strong
So it hurts even worse
When you CAN'T

yup, perfect explaination of cryin. :( keep it up, not crying obviously but ......smile!