Hey,
ur poem is really....touchful..it really went deep down in my heart. ive felt that way b4. i loved some1 so much an then my rents didnt really like him an thourght i could do better. but i spose the hell wat my rents say..right! well it really botherd me, and we ended up breaking up anyway, i was so sad but in the end i thourght it was for the best anyway, i ended up actully thanking my rents for seeing the bad in him. he lied to me, he cheated on me, and also did drugs behind my bak, but i spose not ll guyz r like that right.. well if u feel like leaving some1 or if u already have an they want u bak, all im gunna say is dont go there, every step is just a step forward, dont ever look bak. keep goin.... for the poem 5/5..,.gud job

I reallly like your poem it relates to me over and over agan . goood jobb keep it up